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@@ -2,14 +2,14 @@ currently, this just displays a test image and dumps
 some text to a computer connected via the 64drive's USB port.
 the image is [a test card by Väinö Helminen.](http://vah.dy.fi/testcard/)
 
-i'm borrowing some code from [krom's repo.](https://github.com/PeterLemon/N64/)
-this has been very useful in getting things up-and-running on the N64
-and i suggest you check out their work.
+some code is borrowed from [krom's repo.](https://github.com/PeterLemon/N64/)
+their work has been invaluable in getting things started on the N64,
+and i recommend checking it out.
 
 the [Dwarf Fortress][dwarf] 8x12 font is included as a 1-bit-per-pixel image.
 
-a [F3DZEX][zexdocs] disassembly is included. i did this myself.
-disassemblies of its data section and the 6102 bootcode
+an [F3DZEX][zexdocs] disassembly is included. i did this myself.
+disassemblies of its data section as well as the 6102 bootcode
 will be done in the future.
 
 [dwarf]: http://www.bay12games.com/dwarves/